Friday, July 24, 2009

The Legend Of Polly Sahor &The Ogre

There once lived a girl named Polly. She was very beautiful! Her eyes were blue. Her hair was blond. One day Polly saw a lion run ( very fast) down the hill. Then she started to run because the lion was chasing her! " HELP!!!"she screamed! Fortunately a prince heard! He was running more like a cheetah than a lion!!! The lion almost got her! Then the prince grabbed her 'cause the lion almost got her! "Oh thank you! You saved my life! By the way my name is Polly." "You're welcome. My name is John."said John. "Well bye. I have to go!"cried Polly. Then she ran away. "Please! Do not go!"said John. "Oh but I have to!"cried Polly. Then she disappeared up the hill. She ran over to her skates and skated about thirty minutes when she saw a poor little cheetah. It was very cute. She ran right over to the cheetah. She said, "You poor little thing!I will try to take you home." "Hey, Polly! Wait up!"said a voice.Then she looked up and saw John. "Can you visit me in my castle?" asked John. "I'm not sure," answered Polly."Well...I guess so." "Great!" said John. "I'll see you there at two o'clock." "Bye!" called Polly as she started to walk away.The next mourning while she was jogging to palace she saw John. "Hey John!' she said."Hi, Polly!'said John."Lets go to the castle now,okay?"Okay!"answered Polly. When they arrived it seemed like everyone in the castle liked John.''Purrr!"said the cheetah.The cheetah said "Hello!I'm Betty!""Huh?You can talk?"asked Polly,surprised."Of course!"said Betty."I think I have to go!Bye!"said John ."Well, okay.Bye!"said Polly and Betty.''OH NO!!!!!!I FORGOT BETTY!!!!!''screeched Polly when she neared her home.And then she raced back to the palace, but Betty was gone!"Oh no!"sobbed Polly."I think I lost Betty for good!"And then suddenly,John came rushing in to the room looking worried."I think I saw Betty in the hands of my nasty brother!!!!!''shouted John.Polly fainted at that news."Quick!I need some water for her!"John called to his maid, Lily;and told her also to get him a glass of water too. "Here;I've got the water."said Lily.John quickly gave Polly the glass of water;and then she suddenly got up!''Whats happening?(groan!urk!)"asked Polly."You just fainted!!!!!!!!!"shouted John."Yeah,yeah.Now wheres Betty?asked Polly."Don't you remember?Shes in the hands of my nasty brother!"he said."Hey stupid little fuzzball!Lets start the stew an-Oh look at that chic!"said a voice(coming from behind Polly."Turn around,Polly!QUICK!!"said John.A shadow was coming on Polly that was as big as Mount Everest!As Polly turned,she grew more and more frightened.Then,she saw a ogre when she turned around."EEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!!"shrieked Polly."You stop doing that this instant!Now look bro,you 're scaring Polly!"cried John to the ogre."B-but that c-can't be your brother!He's not human!"said Polly,still frightened. "Well he is!!!!!!!!!!!!"said John,sounding furious."GRRRRRRRR!!!!!Hm-mm,I think that theirs a nutty nut here!,"chuckled the ogre,"And "And "Betty" is MINE!!!!Heeee!And my name is Edward. "said Edward."You knock it off!said Polly,sternly."That's what you think!You know,if I step on you, I could kill you!""EEEEEKKKKKK!!!!"screeched Polly.Then, John quickly grabbed Betty,and started to run;and Polly followed.They were actually going 10 miles per hour!And Edward couldn't catch up;because he was so big!They reached Polly's house in no time!They quickly hid Betty and Edward lost sight of them.And they lived happily ever after.The End
Wait!No one really knows what happened to them.Some say that Edward crushed them in London and they are still there today.Some say Polly got mad at John and hurled herself into the river.


Now this is the real end.See ya!

I think that theirs

than a lion


6 comments:

  1. I like this story! Are you going to write more? It is soooooooooo good.

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  2. Great start to your story - I hope you write more!

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  3. I love this story! Just don't forget CAPITOLS and "quotation marks".

    -Maria

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  4. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Will she go to John's castle? Will she take the cheetah?

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  5. This isn't a WHOLE story yet. Please write more!

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